Monday, September 14, 2009
not finished after all
Okay, I worked on this one a little more. I didn't like the way the upper stripe seemed split in two parts so I consolidated that a little more and I made the focal point a little stronger and more interesting (I hope). I'll see if that holds my attention. I tried editing this down as per Nicholas Simmons's suggestion but then I couldn't zoom in and see the details. I will work on my editing skills.